小学英语作文辅导(精选多篇)

第一篇：英语作文辅导奖

题目：my best friend

扶沟县秋实高级中学

三．3班陈军宇辅导老师：王倩楠

my best friend

li yan, my best friend, is my classmate. she has big eyes. her long hair is often plained. sweet smile is often on her face, makes her more lively.

li yan is very clever. she is good at her school subjects. she has wonthe school scholarship twice, i always take her as my model in study. she tells me that we should make good use of time.

li yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to helping others. any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help. she doesn＇t like others to praise her, because she thinks what she did is ordinary.i feel proud to have such a friend.

评语：本文第一段第二行中that改为which, 因为在此用which引导非限制性定语从句。

第二段第一行中has改为had, 因为两次获得奖学金应该用过去完成时态。

第三段中helping 改为help, 因为之前的to为动词不定式后应用动词原形。

第三段第二行中so改为but, 因为联系上下文句意在此应表转折。

本文简述我的一位最好的朋友李燕，从她的外貌，学习和人际交往方面展开描述。李燕不但长的漂亮，而且学习优秀，两次获得奖学金，是我学习的典范。另外她心地善良，非常乐于助人，为人谦虚谨慎。本文语句结构精确且用词精炼优美，主题突出，不失一篇经典之作。

第二篇：2014英语中考作文辅导

2014英语中考作文辅导

1、手机利与弊

recently,short messages become more and more popular with both the young and the old.people accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them.

as to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messages,in my opinion,there're three points.first, it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.by comparison with letters or email,short messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with them.second,short messages cost less than making a phone call.third,people who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easily,through which more and more people can know of others and become friends. joozone.com

however,nothing that is perfect exists in the world.short messages also have some disadvantages with them.some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messages.also,taking advantage of people's ignorance,some websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messages.above all,short message is product of the hitech nowadays.it will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it.

2、关于电动车

a lot of "family of electric vehicles students" have no knowledge of the relevant transport training, do not look at traffic signs on the road marking, like the electric car when the motorcycle o(好 范文网：Www.)pened, often in disregard of the risk into the fast lane, or speeding along in the slow . as a result, the road can often be seenchaos, reverse, cut-away line of electric vehicles, the bad behavior of the traffic awareness and timely, if not corrected, would have an adverse impact on children. at the same time, each value of electric vehicles as a re ……此处隐藏8166个字……前提下，可以用文章中的原句，当然更好是使用自己的话，灵活地进行各种转换。

总之，写作能力的培养与提高，不是一朝一夕就能办到的，应贯穿于英语教学的全过程，教师要由浅入深、由易到难，循序渐进地引导学生进行写作训练，使学生感到有话想说，有话可说，实事求是地表达自己的感受和情感，从而逐渐提高写作能力

英文写作之“三大黄金定律”

人们进行写作的一般目的是向读者传递信息、介绍情况，或阐述作者对某一主题所持的观点，用英文写作也不例外。为让读者更好地理解所传递的信息，使用英文进行写作时，行文一定要注意做到清晰、准确、简洁这三点，这就是公认的英文写作“三大黄金定律”。 定律之一：清晰

文章的清晰体现在读者能够很容易理解作者讲述的内容。为保证所写文章清晰明了，写作时有两点一定要加以注意：

一是越确切具体越好。在这一方面，作者首先应明确了解自己所要传达的信息、读者的范围及特点，然后再选择相关信息，采用某种文体格式传递给读者。也就是说，写作必须要以特定读者为对象，以让读者能够明确接受作者所传递的信息为宗旨。尽量以客观陈述为主，少主观臆测推断；尽量明确无误表达，少模棱两可评论，这是使文章清晰确切的写作准则。 二是组织结构富有逻辑性。文章结构富有逻辑性会让读者很轻松地读懂作者要表达的思想内容。文章的这种逻辑性可以通过采用从一般到具体、从“全景”到细节、从问题的定义到分析再到提出解决方案等多种方式来体现。

定律之二：准确

要使文章语义表达准确，首先要尽量不要在学术文章中出现“大概、也许”之类模棱两可的词语，避免出现容易让人困惑和误解的词语和表达法;其次，要尽量避免使用那些有多种含义的词语和表达法。例如：singapore is a fine country. 这句话中的fine一词有多种含义，

如“好的、细小的、罚款”等。日常生活中这样使用没有问题，但在写作时一定要避免使用这种容易产生歧义的多义词。

定律之三：简洁

直截了当、切中要点是保证文章简洁的最好写作形式。与中文写作相比，英文写作非常强调直奔主题、简单明快的写作风格。例如，在写作一个段落时，常常将概括段落主要内容的主题句(topic sentence)作为段落的首句，以便让读者迅速明确本段要讲述的内容。另外，写作时尽量将每个句子写得简短一些，少用或不用冗长的复合句。切记：短小精练的句子表达的意思才强而有力。

英文 e-mail 的写作要领

首先，必须要在标题(heading)栏的“收件人(to)”框中输入收信人的e-mail 地址。“主题(subject)”框的内容应简明地概括信的内容，短的可以是一个单词，如greetings；长的可以是一个名词性短语，也可以是完整句，但长度一般不超过35个字母。“主题”框的内容切忌含糊不清。像news about the meeting 这样的表达，应改为tomorrow's meeting canceled。一般来说，只要将位于句首的单词和专有名词的首字母大写即可。另外一种较为正规的格式可将除了少于5个字母的介词、连接词或冠词之外的每一个单词的首字母大写，如：new e-mail address notification. 视信的内容是否重要，还可以开头加上urgent 或者fyi (for your information，供参考)，如：urgent: submit your report today!

e-mail 一般使用非正式的文体，因此正文(body)前的称呼(salutation)通常无须使用诸如"dear mr. john"之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名，但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔加上姓。如：tommy 或者mr. smith。

e-mail 文体的另外一个特点是简单明了，便于阅读，太长的内容可以以附件的方式发出。一个段落大多仅由一到三个句子组成。信尾客套话(complimentary close)通常也很简明。常常只须一个词，如："thanks", "best", "cheers"，不需要用一般信函中的"sincerely yours"或"best regards"。称呼和正文之间，段落之间，正文和信尾客套话之间一般空一行，开头无须空格。如：

jimmy,

i received your memo and will discuss it with eric on wednesday.

best, david

在电子邮件的使用者中还流行使用一些由首字母或读音组成的缩略词，如：

d u wnt 2 go out 2nite: do you want to go out tonight?

lol: laughing out loud

oic: oh, i see.

mte: my thoughts exactly.

brb: i'll be right back.

c u 2morrow: see you tomorrow.

fanx 4 ur elp: thanks for your help.

gr8: great

btw: by the way

imho: in my humble opinion

asap: as soon as possible.

e-mail的非正式的文体特点并不意味它的撰写可以马虎行事，特别是给长辈或上级写信，或者撰写业务信函更是如此。写完信后，一定要认真检查有无拼写、语法和标点符号的误。当然outlook express等软件的“拼写检查”功能可以助你一臂之力。

初中英语作文：一位好朋友 a good friend of mine

一位好朋友

a good friend of mine

迈克是我的好朋友。每当我需要帮助时，他就来到我身边。一天放学了，我不得不留下来跟3组的同学一起打扫卫生。但3组的其他人都在外边玩，他们谁都不想回来。于是迈克就过来帮我扫地。真是，患难朋友才是真正的朋友。

mike is my good friend. any time i need help, he will come to me. one day after school, i had to stay and clean the classroom with group three. but they were still playing outside without any sign to go back. so mike came and helped me clean the floor. a friend in need is a friend indeed.